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    Thomas Jefferson's original Declaration of Independence rough draft

    In celebration of the 4th, Thomas Jefferson's original Declaration of Independence rough draft

    Thomas Jefferson's "original Rough draught," or rough draft, of the Declaration of Independence, written in June 1776, includes dozens of edits from historical figures, including John Adams and Benjamin Franklin. The Library of Congress has made high-resolution microfilm scans of the document available online.

    Congress appointed a committee to draft the declaration on June 11, 1776. It included Jefferson, Franklin and Adams along with Roger Sherman and Robert Livingston. Jefferson had previously drafted the Virginia Constitution in May of that year, and historians say that earlier writing influenced the Declaration of Independence.

    The drafters made 86 changes to the initial manuscript, according to the Library of Congress. The early version shows one of the edits added the iconic phrase, “We hold these truths to be self-evident,” which originally read, "We hold these truths to be sacred & undeniable."

    The final draft's line, "that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness," was initially wordier. It read: "that from that equal creation they derive in rights inherent & inalienable, among which are the preservation of life, & liberty, & the pursuit of happiness."

    ...Jefferson, the committee and Congress itself made many revisions before releasing the document -- some of which reportedly displeased Jefferson. For example, an entire paragraph blaming Britain's King George III for the American slave trade was omitted from the final version, according to the Library of Congress.

    The Declaration of Independence was submitted to the Continental Congress on June 28, 1776, approved on July 2 and declared on July 4, which is now celebrated as Independence Day.
    Image 1 of Thomas Jefferson, June 1776, Rough Draft of the Declaration of Independence. Go there to see more, here's screencap:

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    What a great document.
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    Indeed. To me it's more important than the Constitution.
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    The DoI is a great document, second only to the Constitution.

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    Historian Bradley J. Birzer, Revolutions: 2020 vs. 1776:

    ...Though both have been radically violent, the differences between the two is, frankly, staggering.

    First, the protestors of 2020, while armed with anger, seem armed with little else. They have slogans, but they have few ideas. When the Americans began to protest as early as 1763, they had years and years—decades, even—of self-rule to reply upon. They also had the traditions of the common law and the natural law. When they fought on Lexington Green, they fought with several generations worth of finely-honed arguments—from law, from experience, and from scripture.

    ...Second, the ideas that the protestors of 2020 hold are those of the politically-correct, left-ish ideological visions of the 1960s: the division of all peoples into races, classes, and genders. When Thomas Jefferson and Congress declared independence in 1776, they did so by proclaiming that “all men are created equal,” each endowed, by the Creator, with life, liberty, and the ability to pursue one’s happiness....

    ...Third, the protestors of 2020 have no conservative element or leadership within their protest. In 1776, for every radical Samuel Adams, there were three, four, or five conservatives, such as John Adams and John Dickinson....

    ...Finally, the protestors of 2020 have shown almost no interest in discussion. They believe their conclusions are unassailable, and, thus, they see debate as nothing more than delay toward their inevitable future. Yet, when we look back at 1776, we see an entire population that engaged in ideas at every level....

    The revolutionaries of 1776 could be just as violent as those of 2020, but they were truly a lot more intelligent and interesting.
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    New to me...

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