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    The experienced captain slammed the 55' Hatteras in reverse just as the magnificent monster exploded from the whitecapping waves with a glistening gloriousness that could only be truly accomplished by one of the most ferocious fighters in the sportfishing world; the Black Marlin.
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    It wasn't his attire that betrayed his recent attainment of wealth, no, he was clad and shorn in the finest of wools, silks and leather... it was the odor that preceded his actual form in the door...the cheap cloying musky assault on the senses I feared might bring an amorous moose crashing through the massive leaded glass window.
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    A familiar tak tak tak sounded in the distance of the dank, twisting alley, the stench of urine and rotting garbage assailing Kip's senses as he crept soundlessly, shrouded in the darkness of the moonless night, the familiar grip of his Walther PPQ comforting his hand as the skittering denizens of this fetid corridor brushed by his feet, fleeing the disturbance ahead.
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    Upon appraising the ghastly scene, Detective Mills quietly muttered "that's the way the cookie crumbles then rotated his lumpy girth and began to waddle back to the car, but I'd heard it...I'd already heard one too many of his corny cliches, but this one...this flippant remark at this particular scene conjured up a rage I hadn't felt since Sally Horton smashed my erupting volcano science project in the 3rd grade
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    The spatter trail had drawn my attention to the blood flecked Jack LaLanne Juicer tucked in the corner of the L-shaped counter...good, I mumbled, I'm not the only gullible idiot in Ferndale, and wondered how many dozens of oranges they too had butchered for a half glass of fresh juice.
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    "The usual" he distractedly muttered towards the gum-smacking new waitress as he beelined it to his make-shift office in the corner booth, only registering after he'd spread out the dog-eared pages and grisly photographs that she wouldn't yet know his usual, or that his usual - Maker's Mark, neat - was actually quite unusual for a Waffle House.
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    As Jeff surveilled the mid-fifties ranch house with its torn screen door and unraked leaves swirling in the driveway, he sneezed repeatedly ... "damn" he cursed... eyes blurring, he grabbed at the large box of tissues on the console to blow his nose - his aching body protesting the slight movement, he murmured to himself "this is going to be a long stake-out"...
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    YAY! I was lonely up in here.
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