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    As I walk along the empty highway of life
    I feel its presents but not its substance
    Its like a hologram
    I see it but cannot connect to it
    my mind drifts back to a time
    when everything I did felt like it had substance
    that time is running out
    and now I feel nothing
    but a feeling of spiritual desertification
    the sun is setting on my life
    and I am lost in the wilderness of self pity
    Please GOD give me a sign that you still care

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    GOD, give us men!
    A time like this demands
    Strong minds, great hearts, true faith and ready hands;
    Men whom the lust of office does not kill;
    Men whom the spoils of office can not buy;
    Men who possess opinions and a will;
    Men who have honor; men who will not lie;
    Men who can stand before a demagogue
    And damn his treacherous flatteries without winking!
    Tall men, sun-crowned, who live above the fog
    In public duty, and in private thinking;
    For while the rabble, with their thumb-worn creeds,
    Their large professions and their little deeds,
    Mingle in selfish strife, lo! Freedom weeps,
    Wrong rules the land and waiting Justice sleeps.

    Josiah Gilbert Holland (d. 1881)

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    I knelt behind roses of furor
    I prayed God "please set me free.
    Free from the chains that bind us ,
    Some are idyllic
    Others very stark ,
    A rendition so hollow
    As the light of dark,
    I hid behind a a tree,
    To nap my soul,
    Suddenly I awoke to my screams,
    Twas not a dream,
    It never seemed,
    I reached upwards towards the Heavens with fear,
    The person I begged to set me free,
    Was me....
    Last edited by Cotton1; 06-28-2023 at 06:03 PM.
    I'm yo.
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    We yo yo

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    At this time Amadeus sits alone in front of his piano and we begin to hear what we saw in "the scream"..


    At conclusion the fantasy type scene pulls away to capture the gentle applause of a stunned audience of lifes art forms in perfect fusion

    . The audience of only me is brought to tears as I realize the anguish of mental illness ,

    Isolation so profound it can only be matched by the loneliness love can provide..
    Last edited by Cotton1; 06-28-2023 at 06:14 PM.
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    I'm yo.
    This my brother yo
    We yo yo

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    Tell me Lord
    Tell me Lord ,
    Why the tears under my eyes,
    Why the days turn to night
    Tell me world
    Tell me world
    Did you see the sun today
    Tell me world
    Tell me world ....
    Last edited by Cotton1; 11-20-2023 at 08:08 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cotton1 View Post
    At this time Amadeus sits alone in front of his piano and we begin to hear what we saw in "the scream"..


    At conclusion the fantasy type scene pulls away to capture the gentle applause of a stunned audience of lifes art forms in perfect fusion

    . The audience of only me is brought to tears as I realize the anguish of mental illness ,

    Isolation so profound it can only be matched by the loneliness love can provide..
    In this writing I wrote this as Amadeus having a delusion . Alter ego. You have to agree not many people have an alter ego with its own mental illness
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